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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#university #education #job #hand #people #skills
It is a widely held view that getting a university degree is the right path
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 achieving a good job.
On the other hand
, some people believe that practical experience is far more important. In
this
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 both sides of the statement will be discussed and my opinion will be provided. It is believed that
bachelor
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 or
master
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 degrees have
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respect among
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 and they are likely to be chosen.
That is
 why the majority goes
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 universities, colleges and other schools. It happens because it is easier to hire a person, who knows the job or
at
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 least
capable
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 of fast learning, than an uneducated one, who needs to study 3-4 years
knowledge
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 within a month.
Furthermore
,
universities
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 students participate in different kinds of workshops,
internships
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and internships
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 or bond with
companies
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representors
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represents
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 various networking meetings. Afterwards, awards are written in special after-graduating lists, which
subsequently
 are handed to the hiring managers.
However
, there might be
no
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 better decision than getting a skilled worker. In detail, there are spheres where
experience
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 takes a significant advantage
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 education. In
such
 moments, where a situation requires
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diplomatic talk, power of leadership or
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ability
of making
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 fast decisions, practical knowledge wins. It means no matter how educated
employee
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 is, he may be standing still when a serious obstacle approaches.
This
 is the reason why nowadays courses, soft skills programs,
marathons
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 are widely used
instead
 of university. Getting high-qualified education is valued for finding a good job.
Nevertheless
, to continue work person needs to develop other skills, which include practical experience. I assume it is important to reach success
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 both
this
 sides.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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