The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the
overall
percentages of four kinds of household recycling items in a certain region from 1992 to 2002, namely plastic
, cans
, paper
, and glass
.
Paper
and glass
saw the biggest rise in recycling over the 10-year period. In 1992, the percentage of paper
and glass
that were recycled saw identical numbers at almost 15%, which were the second largest figures among the four kinds of household waste
. Over the following five years, the recycling rate
of paper
overtook glass
and became the most recyclable category of family waste
reaching above 30%, whereas
the figure for glass
was around 28%. By 2002, glass
became the major recycling item in each family and the rate
of recycling increased by approximately 20% compared with the data in 1997.
The other two types of family waste
that were reused were plastic
and cans
. In 1992, cans
were the most common recycling waste
with the data reaching 18%, on the other hand
, the recycling rate
on
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for
plastic
was the lowest in the same year at just 10%. Although
a slight drop in household recycling rate
on cans
was seen in 1997, the figure was still higher than that of plastic
(around 12%). By 2002, reusing
Correct article usage
the reusing
rate
of cans
grew to almost a quarter, while
plastic
remain unchanged at the same level.Submitted by annieeannie on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, cans, paper, glass, waste, rate with synonyms.
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