The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion of
women
who are enrolled in senior
management
in several
companies
in 40 years (from 1975 to 2015).
Overall
, Eldan
Ltd
shows the highest
percentage
of participation of
women
in senior
management
meanwhile, Finsbury
Ltd
displays the lowest
percentage
. In 1975, Finsbury
Ltd
showed the highest
percentage
of
women
who were enrolled in senior
management
between the other two
companies
with 16%,
this
trend
fluctuated over time with a 2% drop in 1980, followed by a slight rise till 1990 with 22%.
Although
in 2000 the
percentage
of
this
company dropped to 20%, in 2015 it increased to 26%.
Therefore
,
this
trend
occupies the
last
place between Eldan
Ltd
and Bamforth
Ltd
companies
.
On the contrary
,
although
Eldan
Ltd
showed the lowest
percentage
of
women
who were enrolled in senior
management
with 3% from 1975 to 1980, the
percentage
of
this
trend
went up to 14% in 1985,
then
in the next five years it was doubled to 28% and increased noticeably in 2000 and 2015 with 33% and 64% respectively, which managed to make
this
trend
the leader between other
companies
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, management, companies, ltd, percentage, trend with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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