Nowadays many people stopped using cash instead they prefer bank cards. advantages and disadvantages.

In

modern

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the modern

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world, with the help of

development

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the development

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of technology utilizing

bank

cards

lead

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leads

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more

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to more

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profit

to

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for

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users than cash. There are some benefits of

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is

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such as

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that the

money

is transferred easily and has a

high

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protected security service.

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,

this

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circumstances cause negative effects that there is a narrow coverage among society

as well as

induce extra charge. On the one hand, using

bank

cards

has

also

positive sides. The

money

is sent and received without any difficulty from any place

which

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where

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you are located.

Therefore

, you can save

your

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time and

do

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not make an extra effort

for giving

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to give

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or

paying

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pay

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the

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money

.

Moreover

, the

bank

companies have created  highly protected preservation of currency. Because, if you lose your

card

, you will not worry about your

money

.

This

is

due to

the fact that there are coded and blocked systems of

bank

cards

.

As a result

, you can save your

bank

card

money

at that time.

For example

, there are variety types of

bank

cards

such

as

,

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visa

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visas

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, local

cards

and

mastercards

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master cards

MasterCard

that give an opportunity to  use your

money

in

different

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a different

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currency

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currencies

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. You can use the

mastercard

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Mastercard

MasterCard

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all over the world and it offers a range of financial services.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks

of

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having

bank

cards

.

These kind

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of

cards

have a number of limitations and

this

is

due to

not all places posses a chance of using

bank

card

payments. The reason is that the Internet connection is not

worked

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or

at

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a low level in

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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countryside

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.

Furthermore

,

bank

companies have created programs to improve the service of their

cards

and  when withdrawing

a

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cash from the

bank

devices, they deduct an amount of percentage.

As a consequence

, there

have

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has

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been an extra payment

and

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which

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causes excessive expenditure of

money

for users.

For instance

, there are some underdeveloped counties and villages which has

not

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no

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access to the Internet. Only about 35

percent

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per cent

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of the population in developing countries has

the

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an

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Internet connection. In conclusion, even though

usage

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the usage

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of

bank

card

payments has convenience and profits, these may cause a number of technical challenges and financial

crisis

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crises

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.