The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following chart below illustrates the figure of Japanese citizens from 1950 to the present and the estimated populace until 2055. The table below provides information about the percentage of the populace between 1950 and 2055.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Japan's community has grown steadily until 2005, and
according to
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predictions, it will decrease sharply until 2055. There is no doubt that from 1950 to 2055, the figure for people aged 65 or older is expected to rise dramatically.
First,
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the community was 84.1
million
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, and it increased every year by approximately 1, 2 or 3
million
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, and it increased by 7 or 8
million
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once in a blue moon.
As a result
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of
such
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growth, the number of people reached 127.8
million
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in 2005.
Then
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, for 15 years,
this
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indicator dropped and in 2015 it fall to 125.4
million
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. In the next 40-year period,
this
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figure is expected to dwindle to 89.9
million
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.
Second,
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from 1950 to 2005, the number of citizens over 65 increased dramatically from 4.1
million
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to 25.7
million
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.
In other words
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,
this
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means a rise in the percentage indicator from 4.9 % to 20.0 %. It is estimated that the population will increase by approximately 12
million
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, and the proportion indicator will increase by 14 % over the next 30-year period. By 2055,
although
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the number of people over 65 years has decreased
as a result
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of the decrease in the total population, their proportion has reached its peak of 41%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as a result".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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