The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
To begin
, the pie charts provide information on global coffee
consumption, the leading four countries the
world when it comes to producing Change preposition
in the
coffee
and how its profit
has been distributed among various parties.
Firstly
, Europeans are responsible for 41% of the coffee
intake followed by the
Americans with 39%. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, the sum of the percentages of Japan and the rest of the world is about 20%, which is about half of the consumption done by the Americans.
Indonesia is the second largest coffee
producer whereas
South Africa ranks at the top responsible for around 44% where it got doubled compared to Indonesia. Both Vietnam and Japan are having portions of 16% and 18% respectively.
Finally
, most of the profit
comes from the deliveries in the coffee
industry which is approximately half of the total revenue. The remaining profit
is distributed among retailers, producers and exporters. About 25% of the total profit
is divided among exporters and producers while
the retailers also
share a portion of 24%.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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