The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
To begin
, the pie charts provide information on global
coffee
consumption, the leading four countries
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world when it comes to producing
coffee
and how its
profit
has been distributed among various parties.
Firstly
, Europeans are responsible for 41% of the
coffee
intake followed by
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Americans with 39%.
Moreover
, the sum of the percentages of Japan and the rest of the world is about 20%, which is about half of the consumption done by the Americans. Indonesia is the second largest
coffee
producer
whereas
South Africa ranks at the top responsible for around 44% where it got doubled compared to Indonesia. Both Vietnam and Japan are having portions of 16% and 18% respectively.
Finally
, most of the
profit
comes from the deliveries in the
coffee
industry which is approximately half of the total revenue. The remaining
profit
is distributed among retailers, producers and exporters. About 25% of the total
profit
is divided among exporters and producers
while
the retailers
also
share a portion of 24%.
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