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Plastic containers have become more prevalent than ever. They are used in many businesses such as in the food and beverage sector. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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, it has been preferred by most companies for their product packaging
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 cost efficiency and easy availability.
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 their benefits it is dangerous for
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 and
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 cons are clearly more
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dominant
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plastic
 waste is being created by
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human
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dumping it in
landfill
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 which in turn malnutrient soil and underground water and individuals
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 sick after consuming them. India,
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, banned
single use
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plastic
 in
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 2022 to prevent soil pollution but many manufacturers still use them unlawfully
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saving
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.To overcome it, subsidies can be provided to promote jute and
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wooden
woven
 packaging.
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, containers and wrappers used by most companies are made
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non food
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 grade
plastic
 which can contaminate
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if heated or get cold for
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 duration which in turn is
unhealthy
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 practice and enough to make a person sick.
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, almost all cold drink companies in my region
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plastic
packing
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 but most dealers reuse
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 to sell water
due to
 which water becomes harmful.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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