Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

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governments
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this
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everyone
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responsibility
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fixed
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this
problem, including persons until
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the
governments
.
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me explain my reason. The evidence
pf
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climate
changed
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was take
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long
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time ago, it changed not only nowadays from
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in
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the
Earth
, just 21st bring many conveniences to the
earth
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it. In fact, in my
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when
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live
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in
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the
earth
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pollute,
everyone
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made any rubbish including waste,
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air, dirty water, etc. But we can’t kill
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to a
cleared
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ecology for
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, so
from
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personally can be
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, just that we can do, I know that’s impossible in
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life
. I talking about when we wake up always pollute the ecology, so
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something
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my
life
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for
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plastic
fork
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one time
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, form less garbage,
secondly
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actually
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we have many
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can alter the environment, so first way from
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do it.
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one
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, the ambience will get a rest from
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space.
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, the
governments
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has
responsibility
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the responsibility
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to better, like
draw
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up the policy and regulations, light to order don’t initiative for plastic
fork
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and soup,
take
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away
the
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anything if bring a bag
pay
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for
recycle
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bounds, or less or
limit
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limiting
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trash car work times, when
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life
. In
font
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is for family or public people,
on the other
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the
governments
can change power policy
,
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like product or support power can be clear energy (green, nuclear energy, water or geothermal from
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) less
rely
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gas, coal or any fire made more exhaust gas, even I know some policy always
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for richer
benfit
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benefit
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and for poorer harm, so from the government found a fair way and plan the route.
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governments
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responsibility, when we start
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our
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what our
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world will become in the future.
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