Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's fast-paced world, transportation facilities are

increasing

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trend among

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people

.

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some cities force the community to use bicycles and buses by preventing

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private cars to enter

to

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the city

center

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. In my opinion, I think that

this

policy

can bring more benefits for folks compared to any disadvantages it might bring. Admittedly, there

are

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some negative

effect

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effects

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of

this

policy

among individuals.

Firstly

,

people

who are coming from another country should face

problems

to go their destinations.

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, if folks coming from China and

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want to go place which is situated in

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the center

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center

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of the Delhi

then

due to

language

problems

they face some

of

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the

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difficulties.

Secondly

,

older

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community

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communities

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who are living alone in their home

also

face

problems

if they want to go

some

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shopping malls.

Thirdly

, travel by electric

bikes

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also

take

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more time than travel by private

cars

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.

Nevertheless

, despite the disadvantages above, I believe

people

could gain more benefits from

this

policy

. One greater advantage is that they remain healthy.

In other words

, if individuals use

bicycle

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bicycles

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rather than go by private cars,

their

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they

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do some physical activities.

As a result

, they are not facing any

health related

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problems

and they are increasing their stamina. Another oblivious benefit is less air pollution in

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center

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because

bike

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bikes

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and electric buses are not generating any air pollution in

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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.

Moreover

, it is

also

noise less

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noiseless

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vehicles, which

also

create

noiseless

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environment

in

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there.

Lastly

, the cost of

this

transportation is less compared to private vehicles fee, which leads more

people

use

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this

policy

. In conclusion, Transportation is increasing in some countries so the government made a

policy

that private vehicles

restricted

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from entering

in

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the city

center

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. I think

this

is far outweighs

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any of the minor downsides it has.