You recently went to an expensive restaurant. Something went wrong. Write a formal email to complain to the restaurant manager. In your email: Describe the problem Explain how the problem affected you Say what you expect the restaurant manager to do You should write at least 120 words. You should take about 20-30 minutes to complete the task.

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Hi Helen, I missed you so much! I was so busy at the moment so I couldn’t reply to your email soon. I was so sad and apologised to you, please forgive me for being late and replied because I was at a campsite which had no wifi and didn't have any internet connection. By the way, I live in Glen Waverley and there are a lot of amazing cuisines

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as Vietnamese food, Thai desserts and Italian sweet dishes. I especially like Italian coffee and dessert as it is delicious. When you visit there I would be a tour guide to bring you all there.

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, there is crazy weather as it has four seasons per day so when you come here, you may prepare different kinds of clothes for that. Don’t get cold when you travel here. Anyway, I feel more comfortable and

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here so you do not worry about my culture shock at the moment. Please let me know your new status and how it is going on

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Please write soon. I love getting letters! Loves, Angie Yours faithfully, Angie

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Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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