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The graphs below compare the average sale price for 3-bedroom houses and changes in populatons in 4 Australian cities between 2012 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line charts provide information about the average prices of 3-bedroom houses and the movement in population size in four cities across Australia from 2012 to 2018.
Overall
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, it is evident that the housing prices in
Sydney
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 were the most expensive among the selected areas,
while
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 in
Hobart
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 and
Adelaide
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, they were the cheapest in 2012 and 2018, respectively. In terms of residents, the figures for
Melbourne
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 and
Hobart
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 were the highest and lowest respectively. Looking at
Sydney
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 and Melbourn in more detail, homes in
Sydney
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 were sold at the highest value of approximately $600,000 in 2012, followed by
Melbourne
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 with a value of only two-thirds of that. Over the 6-year period, the trend in both districts was constantly upward and
finally
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 reached their peak at $750,000 for
Sydney
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 and $500,000 for
Melbourne
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. As for population size, the figures for these areas experienced a relative increase of 50% throughout the years, finishing at 90,000 residents in
Melbourne
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 and 75,000 in
Sydney
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 in the final year.
On the other hand
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, in
Hobart
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 and
Adelaide
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,
although
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 the number of inhabitants was far behind the other two areas, the average housing cost was just minimally lower than that in
Melbourne
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. In 2012,
Hobart
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 had the cheapest housing value of $300,000;
however
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, its house prices steadily rose by one-third and overtook its
Adelaide
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 counterparts in 2018.
In contrast
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, the population size in both cities remained steady, with
Hobart
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 and
Adelaide
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 having 5,000 and 10,000 residents, respectively, in the final year.
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