The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of how
rain
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rainwater
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water
is collected and converted to use
it
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apply
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as drinking
water
in an Australian town. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that there are 5 steps to
get
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getting
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clean drinking
water
. First of all, when the rain
water
fall
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falls
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to the ground, it will be transferred through tubes under the ground from all the existing houses to the drains.
Then
the
water
will be filtered by the
water
filter. After that, the filtered
water
will be taken to a huge storage box. Following that, the
water
treatment will receive the
water
from the storage and separate the chemical from the
recieved
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received
water
.
The next step is
,
water
will be sent to the houses and be ready to be drunk.
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