The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of how

rain

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rainwater

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water

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is collected and converted to use

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as drinking

water

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in an Australian town. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that there are 5 steps to

get

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clean drinking

water

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. First of all, when the rain

water

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fall

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falls

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to the ground, it will be transferred through tubes under the ground from all the existing houses to the drains.

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the

water

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will be filtered by the

water

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filter. After that, the filtered

water

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will be taken to a huge storage box. Following that, the

water

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treatment will receive the

water

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from the storage and separate the chemical from the

recieved

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received

water

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The next step is

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water

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will be sent to the houses and be ready to be drunk.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

129 words

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