You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreinn country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I am writing

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letter to inform you that we will visit the Emporium resort located in Italy during our holidays. And some of my friends desire to stay from the 25th of Jan to the 9th of Feb since it is the only time we can use our annual leave. By staying in Italy, we have

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urge to taste authentic Italian dishes

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as gelato and carbonara. We have been working as chefs in an Italian restaurant making artificial Italian cuisine. So, we want to realise how the real ones are.

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, we want to know if it is possible to have opportunities to participate in a kitchen experience during the trip.

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, if the trip is successful, I am planning to bring my

families

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here through your tourism company and one of my relatives is vegetarian.

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, if you can provide me with some

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places and vegetarian options in Italy, I will really appreciate it. Yours faithfully, Injun Lee

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Single idea per paragraph

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