The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts indicate the population of males and females, in different
age
ranges, who work in Australia between 1984 and 2014 respectively.
Overall
, the number of men in age
between 35 to 44 years
old took up the largest proportion, while
those females displayed a perpetuated growth. On the other hand
, both female and male employees between 15 and 19 display a downward trend, while
an opposite situtation
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situation
be
seen in elderly people.
First of all, young adults played an essential role in the workplace, at more than 90% in all surveyed Correct subject-verb agreement
is
years
, compared to female employees in the same age
range between 35 to 44 years
old shown an increase from less than 60% in 1984 up to almost 80% in 2014.
On top of that, there were more young female workers than male ones, in which both figures displayed a decrease during the surveyed period, the former at nearly 60% in 2014, the
latter at 50%. Reversedly, the elderly population who remain in the workforce were continuous surge, especially for female workers Correct word choice
and the
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in Correct pronoun usage
apply
age
between 60 to 64 years
old, the
data in 2014 at 10%, four times more than that of 1984.Change preposition
with the
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