The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.

The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.
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The chart illustrates man and woman teachers’
proportion
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in six diverse sorts of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
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, it can be seen clearly that woman educators had a much higher percentage than
men
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in some institutions. There were in all basic education. Looking at more details, women showed a high rate in two low institutions which were nursery/pre-school and primary school at 98% and 96%, respectively.
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,
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, represented the opposite
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almost ten times lower in the same workplace.
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, the secondary schools reported data that women were a little bit higher than
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by 5%. Moving on to male teachers, the
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of man lecturers who worked in university accounted for 70% higher than females being two times lower than the
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’s percentage. The same data was showed by private training institutes that
men
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had a high
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than women even though the difference was 5%.
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, the college had the same
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of male and female lecturers at 50%.
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