The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the number of car
journeys
into the city centre made by residents and non-residents over a
ten year
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period. In 1996 an average of just under 10,000
journeys
per day were being made by residents,
while
approximately half that number were made by non-residents. Over the subsequent three years,
resident
journeys
remained reasonably stable,
while
non-
resident
journeys
increased each year, exceeding 8,000 per day in 1999. In early 2000, parking meters were introduced into the city centre, and
this
had the effect of virtually halving
resident
traffic
,
although
non-
resident
traffic
decreased only slightly. By the end of 2002, the number of
resident
journeys
had not altered significantly, but non-
resident
journeys
had risen to their 1999 level. At
this
point, Westgate Street and Park Lane were pedestrianised.
This
resulted in a dramatic decline in non-
resident
traffic
, and a slight decrease in
resident
traffic
. From
this
point onward,
resident
traffic
remained more or less at the same level,
while
non-
resident
traffic
resumed its upward trend, reaching nearly 5,000
journeys
per day in 2005.
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