The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian man and woman in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian man and woman in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides the proportion of Australian men and women in different
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ranges who used to be physically active in 2010.
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, it can be seen that in 2010, the percentages of females practising an active lifestyle, except for the one related to those aged between 15 and 24, were greater than the proportions of men doing it. Regarding the female categories, the fractions of women aged 35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64 were the most active, with approximately 53 of each
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group engaging in physical activity. Meanwhile, the other 3
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categories went from 47% to nearly 49%. About physically active men in 2010, their only
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section outnumbering a female category was that going from 15 to 24 years old, at just around 5% ahead of females in that range. Just following those ages, there was the eldest fraction at approximately the same percentage as the female fraction between those ages.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Gender difference
  • Proportion
  • Participation rate
  • Exercise
  • Physical fitness
  • Observation
  • Likely causes
  • Activity levels
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