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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
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 household
energy
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 household
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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 by water heating, heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances. The most used
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energy
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 households is heating with 42
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,
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 the most
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 households is water heating with 32
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. And vice versa, the least
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 of both using
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greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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 in
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 households are cooling. Looking at the details, the
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 from refrigeration, lighting, and other appliances is about twice as significant as their
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, is much greater than the
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gas
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, which is 15
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. Cooling and water heating have almost the exact percentages of about 3
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 and around 30
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 in both
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greenhouse
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gas
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 emission in an
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, australian, energy, greenhouse, gas, emissions, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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