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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
percentage
 of
Australian
 household
energy
 use and
Australian
 household
greenhouse
gas
emissions
 by water heating, heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances. The most used
of
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energy
 in
Australian
 households is heating with 42
percent
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,
whereas
 the most
gas
 emission in
Australian
 households is water heating with 32
percent
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. And vice versa, the least
percentage
 of both using
energy
 and
greenhouse
gas
emissions
 in
Australian
 households are cooling. Looking at the details, the
percentage
 of
greenhouse
gas
emissions
 from refrigeration, lighting, and other appliances is about twice as significant as their
energy
 usage
percentage
.
In addition
, the heating in
energy
 use, which is about 42
percent
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, is much greater than the
percentage
 of that
greenhouse
gas
emissions
, which is 15
percent
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. Cooling and water heating have almost the exact percentages of about 3
percent
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 and around 30
percent
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 in both
energy
 use and
greenhouse
gas
 emission in an
Australian
 household.
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