You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position Express your gratitude Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Barry,

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Barry, I am writing to regrettably inform you that I have decided to decline the job

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. I am declining the

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fit. I am not sure if I would have the freedom to experiment and openness to learning. During the

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the high churn among the Managers. Unfortunately,

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is a red flag and reflects a lack of direction within the Engineering organization. I would like to remain in my current position because it affords me the flexibility to pursue my higher education. As I mentioned during the

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, I am studying towards gaining my Master's degree in Computer Science.

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promotion on completion of the degree. I want to thank you again for

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of employment. It was a smooth

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process, beginning with the first

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and all the way to the final

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. Yours sincerely, Andrew Songate

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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