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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Unemployment Rates: US and Japan

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Unemployment Rates: US and Japan
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This
 line chart depicts
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the percnteage
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percnteage
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percentage
 of unemployment in two countries:
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the
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United States and Japan from
March
 1993 to
March
 1999. It is clear from the graph that,
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the difference
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difference
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different
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in ratio
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ratio
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ratios
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 of
the
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apply
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unemployment between these countries.
According to
 what is shown, in
US
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the US
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 the proportion of
work force
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workforce
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 it is
sink
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a sink
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 in
March
 1995, but in that year it is consistent until
next
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the next
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 year,
then
also
 drop in
March
 1999.
While
 in Japan increase from
March
 1993 to
March
 1996, but in
March
 1997 it
is seem
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 steady and
the
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in the
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last
 years between
March
 1998 and
March
 1999 the
work force
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workforce
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climbly
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climbed
climbing
.
To sum up
, we could say that, their sharp
deference
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difference
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 between these countries because in
United
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the United
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 States There is a noticeable drop, but in Japan
opposite
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the opposite
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 completely it is
soarly
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sorely
 for the
perecntage
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percentage
 of unemployment.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words march with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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