The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The chart below illustrates the expenditure on three categories between five age groups in the United Kingdom in 2004. The main feature of
this
chart is a group of people
from 61 to 75.
People
under 30 years
old spend about 15 per cent
of all of their money
on restaurants or hotels and from 6 to 7 per cent
on food
and entertainment
. People
between 31 and 45 years
old almost all the time try to spend their money
more rationally and less amount of money
on the entertainment
part of their life. they spend almost the same money
on both restaurants and food
or drinks.
People
who are in the category of 46 to 60 years
old use their budget mostly on food
and less on hotels and funny stuff. Talking about more adult people
who are between 61 and 75 years
old spend more than 20 per cent
of their money
on entertainment
and 20 per cent
on food
and drinks. People
who are over 76 years
old mostly buy some food
and drink on almost 24 per cent
of all their budget and less than 15 per cent
on entertainment
and hotels or restaurants.Submitted by nikita.nikityuk1 on
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