The bar chart belows shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart belows shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of Australian households of different gender and ages who did
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general physical
activity
,
for example
, exercise in 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
men
population in Australia had a decreased
rate
of doing normal physical
activity
,
while
women
in Australian households were increasing gradually in 2010.
To begin
, the percentage of
women
in households who were 45-54
years
old was the highest percentage which was 53.3%. In comparison, the highest
rate
of
women
who do
activity
was much more than the largest
rate
for
men
, which was 52.8% (15 to 24
years
old).
However
, there experienced a close
rate
in ages 65 and over
years
old for
women
and
men
, 47.1% and 46.7% respectively.
According to
the proportion of
men
doing physical
activity
, the least
rate
was in the age group of 35 to 44
years
old which was 39.5% and it was a different data that compared to
women
's percentage at 13.0%.
Therefore
, the number of
women
in Australia increased growth when they are older, but for
men
, there was a declining trend
instead
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regular physical activity
  • percentage (%)
  • age groups
  • gender comparison
  • Australian demographics
  • bar chart
  • trends
  • peak activity levels
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • vigorous exercise
  • moderate exercise
  • age bracket
  • physically active
  • statistical overview
  • exercise habits
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