The bar chart belows shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of Australian households of different gender and ages who did general physical
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activity
,for example
, exercise in 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
men
population in Australia had a decreased rate
of doing normal physical activity
, while
women
in Australian households were increasing gradually in 2010.
To begin
, the percentage of women
in households who were 45-54 years
old was the highest percentage which was 53.3%. In comparison, the highest rate
of women
who do activity
was much more than the largest rate
for men
, which was 52.8% (15 to 24 years
old). However
, there experienced a close rate
in ages 65 and over years
old for women
and men
, 47.1% and 46.7% respectively.
According to
the proportion of men
doing physical activity
, the least rate
was in the age group of 35 to 44 years
old which was 39.5% and it was a different data that compared to women
's percentage at 13.0%. Therefore
, the number of women
in Australia increased growth when they are older, but for men
, there was a declining trend instead
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