The graph below shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart describes the gender ratio of staff members who
belonging
to the Wrong verb form
belonged
accademic
faculties of a leading college in 2012. Correct your spelling
academic
Overall
, the number of departments where there are more male
than female is larger than the opposite case, Fix the agreement mistake
males
while
a few faculties have more women.
The male percentages of
business, engineering, law, and science surpass 50%, Change preposition
in
in particular
, in engineering
there are over 4 times more male members than Add a comma
,engineering
female
. Regarding business and science, there is Fix the agreement mistake
females
the
similar difference, where the number of men is twice as big as Correct article usage
a
female
. Fix the agreement mistake
females
However
, the law faclty
does not have a so significant gap as the other since the variance between the genders is approximately 20%.
Correct your spelling
faculty
On the other hand
, a majority of people in arts
, education, and medicine section Correct article usage
the arts
is
female. In Correct subject-verb agreement
are
education
faculty, a remarkable gender divergence is observed, and nearly 4 times more female is involved than male, Correct article usage
the education
while
the rate gaps
Fix the agreement mistake
gap
less
than 20% can be seen in Change preposition
of less
arts
and medicine Correct article usage
the arts
departmant
. The medicine faculty has Correct your spelling
department
almost
even Correct article usage
an almost
gender
ratio Correct article usage
a gender
although
the female number is slightly higher than male
.Correct article usage
the male
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