You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

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Mr/Mrs.Smith, I am writing

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letter regarding the vacancy for a sports teacher in our

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as I want to suggest my best friend for

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position. I have known him since our childhood. We both studied together in

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. He is an energetic person who always participated in games and won a large number of medals for

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. I would like to tell you about his studies. Because of, his performance at the

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level he got admission to college. He completed his degree in physical education and physiotherapy which is a requirement for

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job.

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, he has experience as an athlete coach at the national level. I believe

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job is suitable for him because our

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need a trainer who motivates our students and gives them proper guidance to become successful in sports activities.

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, his experience can act as an asset for children to learn skills easily. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nick Jones

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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