The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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The first chart below illustrates the percentages of
women
and men
in a particular country who took part in some kinds of house
chores (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and fixing the house
), while
the second chart describes the amount of time spent by each gender on each task per day.
Overall
, the females mostly involve in chores like cooking and cleaning, while
the males mostly take care of their pets and repair their houses. Moreover
, the women
in this
country spend more time on home tasks than men
.
As for cooking and cleaning, the females' involvement was 20% higher than the males'. When it comes to pet caring, both genders take part in it almost equally. However
, the percentage of men
who are involved in house
repairs is 10% greater than that of women
.
The women
spend over 20 minutes
more than the men
on cooking and cleaning. On pet care, both genders spend around 20 minutes
. In contrast
, the men
spend nearly 20 minutes
on house
repairs, while
the women
spend about 5 minutes
on it daily.Submitted by okhaliunaa on
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