The chart shows the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants

The chart shows the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants
The first pie chart gives us pieces of data about the habits of people eating at home or in
restaurants
over 3 decades from 1970 to 2000
while
the line graph below is a comparison between the number of people eating fast
food
meals
or sitdown
restaurant
meals
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
spending money on
restaurant
meals
was already an upward trend and it is even more true when we talk about fast
food
. Indeed, from the first chart we learn that the percentage of
food
budget spent on
restaurant
meals
had multiplied by 5 from 1970 to 2000. Indeed , 10% of the
food
budget was destinated for
restaurants
in 1970, 15% in 1980, more than the double
of
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1980 in 1990 with 35%, to
finally
arrived in 2000 with an equal budget for home cooking and
restaurant
meals
.
In
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a
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second time, the curve from the second chart shows us that eating
meals
at
restaurants
is becoming more and more famous.
However
, even
if
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in 1970 there were as
much
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people eating fast
food
meals
as sit-down
restaurant
meals
. A gap between these two categories appeared in 1980. Indeed,
while
the
increasing
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in popularity of
restaurants
tend to slow down, the number of fast
food
meals
per person sharply climbed from 30
meals
per year in 1980 to 90 in 2000.
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