The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.

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The table illustrates the proportion of developed people in rural and urban areas who participated in four leisure-time activities between 1995 and 2010.

Overall

, there were two activities that altered over course of a decade. These were namely, reading and photography. Reading was the most popular activity between 1995 and 2010 in both urban and rural areas. But ,the players in both rural and urban spaces changed significantly. The number of people engaged in reading as a leisure activity increased rapidly in both rural and urban areas between 1990 and 2010 with 61% and 71% respectively.

However

, a small portion just over 25% in rural parts, did take part in playing between 1990 and 2010.

While

urban space had a ratio of 21% and 14% respectively. A small percentage of people took part in photography in urban spaces, But, the rural part saw a major variation in the amount of 14% and 24% between 1990 and 2010.

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The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

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