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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The following plans show the layout of the university's
sports
 centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.
Overall
, there are going to be 9 changes in the university's
sports
 centre plan.
To begin
 with,
two
 outdoor courts will be removed in the new plan.
Next,
all sections
such
 as the size of the pool, the seating, the place of reception, and the changing room will not be changed. The next change is the gym which will be replaced with a bigger one in the same place. It will be added to the
sports
 hall on the right of the seating. It is going to be added
two
 dance studios in the corner on the right of the
sports
 hall. It will be added
two
 changing rooms on the
two
 sides of the corner at the bottom.
In addition
, it will be added the Cafe and
sports
 shops, next to each changing room. In the end, it will be added the leisure pool on the right side of the pool.
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