ome people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Job
is so important so if someone asked me change
a Add the particle
to change
job
or keeping
it to get more valuable Wrong verb form
keep
experience
Although
I agree that changing jobs may bring some benefits , i
think that keep doing a Change the capitalization
I
job
for a long time can bring people
satisfying career life.
There are have
a lot of things Unnecessary verb
apply
make
some Correct pronoun usage
that make
people
change
a
Change preposition
from a
job
at this
time to a new job
such
as salary, job
perks, position
,...And there are Correct word choice
and position
also
many other reasons why they choose to quit their present job
such
as wanting to have more valuable experience
, being
able to apply the Correct word choice
and being
experience
from their old job
to a new job
to be exposed to different roles. than
earn money to take care of their family.Another reason is that by Replace the word
then
to
Change the verb form
changing
change
a job
people
may stand a chance of experiencing various working places, for example
, if some people
dislike some ideas in your
old Correct pronoun usage
their
job
they want to change
a new job
to find more variety in job
and from there they gaining
new Wrong verb form
gain
experience
and progress more quickly.
However
, staying at a job
for a long time can bring you many other benefits such
as promote
in a Replace the word
promotion
job
. When another company decide
promote or dismiss anyone, they will Add the particle
todecide
to
consider Change the verb form
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
experience
, devotion ,motivated
and Replace the word
motivation
engaged
to choose.And Replace the word
engagement
more over
, your salary will increase Correct your spelling
moreover
follow
year you Change the form of the verb
following
doing
a Wrong verb form
do
job
, keep doing a job
can help you build a network of contacts.
In conclusion,keep doing a job
can help people
more valuable experience
and satisfying career life than change
jobs.Wrong verb form
changing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite