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The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph depicts how many
minutes
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 were utilized by British people over phone calls, which were segregated into three types, namely local-fixed
line
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, national and international-fixed
line
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, and mobile calls.
This
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 study was conducted during a period of seven years, commencing from 1995 to 2002. At first glance, it is recognizable that
overall
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, the usage of telephones for the local-fixed
line
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 was the most common in the UK during these times,
whereas
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, mobiles were less popular for all multifarious calls,
however
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, it gained some popularity over time. Looking at the chart in more detail, it can be vividly observed from the data given in the blueprint. In 1995, more than 70
billion
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minutes
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 were spent on local-fixed
line
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 calls, which was the highest percentage in comparison to other categories, and it was followed by national and international-fixed calls and smartphone calls, with slightly below 40
billion
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 and approximately 5
billion
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 respectively. After half-decade, a gradual increase was spotted in the rate of
minutes
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 used by the citizens of Great Britain in all of these categories.
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, the proportion of
minutes
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 consumed over domestic-fixed
line
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 dials moderately declined between 2000 and 2002, and it reached 70
billion
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, in the meantime, there was a dramatic rise in the mobiles users, and in 2002 it accounted for 45
billion
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minutes
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,
while
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, the number of
minutes
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 for either national or international fixed calls went up over
this
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 period.
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