Write about the following topic: Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
modern
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a modern
the modern
world
most Add a comma
,world
mens
and Correct your spelling
men
men's
women's
are working equally in Change noun form
women
most
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the most
profession
but some certain jobs are not suitable for Fix the agreement mistake
professions
females
due to
the nature of the work.also
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,also
men's
are not good Change noun form
men
in particular
jobs and in this
essay I will argue that to keep aces in place need to choose right
people for Correct article usage
the right
right
job regards of their gender,
Correct article usage
the right
Firstly
, most males are good at marketing and business also
females
are doing much more
better than males, but the certain profession Change the word
apply
such
as construction, carpentry ,warehouse
Correct word choice
and warehouse
works
women's
are unable to do those Change noun form
women
heavy duty
Add a hyphen
heavy-duty
works
, therefore
, definitely ladies will step back whenever there is
hard heavy Change the verb form
are
works
involved and it is very rare that females
employees are applying for those occupation and woman's are looking more on soft works
such
as office admins ,receptions. in addition
to
, .at the same time even though males are good in Change preposition
apply
marketing
field still employers are looking Correct article usage
the marketing
more
female candidates to attract Change preposition
for more
the
customers and Correct article usage
apply
to
boost their revenue.
Nowadays, so many job vacancies are Fix the infinitive
apply
posting
Wrong verb form
posted
in
the internet and employers are specifically mentioning jobs are open only for Change preposition
on
females
, but there is
many more talented Change the verb form
are
mens
with Correct your spelling
men
lot
of experience Change the article
a lot
will
not get Correct pronoun usage
who will
and
any chances.Correct word choice
apply
For
instance
survey conducted by Add a comma
,instance
famous
Correct article usage
a famous
magazine
shows most real estate agents are now Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
females
even though they are
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
skills and energy. Change preposition
apply
also
at the same time
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,time
Correct your spelling
men's
men
mens
and Correct your spelling
men
women's
are working very hard but not every job is matching for both parties,
In conclusion.it is Change noun form
women
right
decision Correct article usage
the right
choose
Fix the infinitive
to choose
correct
person at Add an article
a correct
correct
time to maintain Add an article
the correct
balance
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a balance
work place
.Correct your spelling
workplace
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