The chart below shows the percentage of males and females with higher education qualifications in five countries in 2001.

The chart below shows the percentage of males and females with higher education qualifications in five countries in 2001.
the bar chart compares the proportion of males and females having higher
education
qualifications
in 5 particular nations in the year 2001.
overall
,
while
the figure for
women
pursuing higher
education
was higher than that of
men
in the US and Germany, Japan, Switzerland and Britain followed an opposite pattern in the given period. turning to the detail, Switzerland's
men
took higher
education
accounted for 45%, which was slightly higher than the figure for
women
.
women
got higher
education
qualifications
in japan was only 20%, compared to over 25% males students.
additionally
, the percentage of
men
who had higher
qualifications
reached 35%,
whereas
the category of
women
was over a third.
in contrast
, in the united states, the number of
women
who preferred getting higher
education
made up 40%, in comparison with only 35% of
men
. The figure for females having higher
qualifications
in Germany was far higher than its males. reaching 45%.
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