The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year of 2009

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year of 2009
The bar chart describes spending in five lifestyle categories for residents of four different nations in 2009. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that housing,
food
, and transportation are the biggest expenses in nearly all countries, with those in the United States spending the most on their homes and those in
Japan
the most on
food
. Healthcare and clothing are smaller expenses and transportation is a greater expenditure than
food
in only
Canada
and the US. Expenditure on
food
ranges from a low of 14% in the United States to a high of 22% for
Japan
, with
Canada
(15%) and the
UK
(21%) in between. Housing costs represented at least a slightly higher percentage in all countries: 26% in the US, 24% in the
UK
, 21% in
Japan
, and 20% in
Canada
. The numbers were more variable for transportation as
Canada
stood at 20%, just above the USA at 19%
while
the
UK
and
Japan
were lower at 15% and 10%, respectively. In terms of healthcare, by far the most is allocated for medical expenses in the USA (8%)
while
all other countries are below 5%. For clothing,
Canada
spends the most of their income (7%), followed by the
UK
(6%),
Japan
(4%), and
finally
the United States (3%).
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