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2006 The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and

2006 The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and
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The line chart depicts information about how much
oil
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 was produced and consumed in China from 1982 to 2006.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there was an upward trend in both
production
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 and consumption of
oil
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 during the given
period
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.
In addition
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,
oil
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 consumption climbed significantly faster in comparison with its
production
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 over 24 years. At the beginning of the
period
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, the figures for both
oil
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production
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 and consumption were nearly equal, at around 2
million
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oil
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 barrels per day. After 8 years, the amount of
oil
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 produced experienced a dramatic rise by 2
million
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 barrels and remained unchanged until 1994. Meanwhile, that of
oil
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 consumed witnessed stability until 1900, after which it grew remarkably to 3
million
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 in 1994. In the second haft of the
period
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, the figure for
oil
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production
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 saw a slight increase to 3,5
million
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 barrels per day.
By contrast
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, the amount of
oil
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 consumed grew steadily by 1
million
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 every 4 years and
finally
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 reached a peak of 6
million
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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