The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Hydroelectric dam

The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Hydroelectric dam
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The diagrams show two different ways in which
water
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can be used to produce
electricity
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. In both diagrams,
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water
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the water
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turns a turbine and a
spindle
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, which powers a
generator
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.
However
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, the way in which
this
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is done is slightly different in each case. In the hydroelectric dam, the process begins when a gate in the dam is opened to allow
water
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from a reservoir to enter and flow down a passage called a penstock. The
water
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turns the turbine and the
spindle
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, and the
spindle
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rotates in the
generator
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to produce
electricity
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.
This
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is distributed to power lines. In the wave-air
generator
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, there are two chambers, a lower
chamber
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and an upper
chamber
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. Waves enter the lower
chamber
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, and the turbine and
spindle
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in the upper
chamber
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are turned by air which rises from the lower
chamber
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. As with the hydroelectric dam, the
spindle
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then
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produces
electricity
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in the
generator
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.
Instead
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of being sent to power lines,
however
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, the
electricity
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is sent directly to a lighthouse or buoys. These diagrams show how
water
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can produce
electricity
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in just a few simple steps.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, electricity, spindle, generator, chamber with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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