The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Hydroelectric dam
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The diagrams show two different ways in which
water
can be used to produce electricity
. In both diagrams, water
turns a turbine and a Add an article
the water
spindle
, which powers a generator
. However
, the way in which this
is done is slightly different in each case.
In the hydroelectric dam, the process begins when a gate in the dam is opened to allow water
from a reservoir to enter and flow down a passage called a penstock. The water
turns the turbine and the spindle
, and the spindle
rotates in the generator
to produce electricity
. This
is distributed to power lines.
In the wave-air generator
, there are two chambers, a lower chamber
and an upper chamber
. Waves enter the lower chamber
, and the turbine and spindle
in the upper chamber
are turned by air which rises from the lower chamber
. As with the hydroelectric dam, the spindle
then
produces electricity
in the generator
. Instead
of being sent to power lines, however
, the electricity
is sent directly to a lighthouse or buoys.
These diagrams show how water
can produce electricity
in just a few simple steps.Submitted by sevrukov.stepan on
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