The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graphs indicate how employees arrange their
time
for various events between 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, working adults spent the majority of their time
on work, on top of that, people reduced the time
they spent going out and sleeping in the latest surveyed year compared to the previous ones, while
the other activities displayed an upward trend.
Workers spent most of their time
working, in which the number continue went up between 1958 and 2008, from 33% went up to 42%. The commuting time
also
displayed a surge to 8% in 2008, which was 4 times higher than that in 1958.
Despite that the majority of activities elucidated an upward trend, there were two events which
working people spent less Change preposition
in which
time
on
in 2008, compared to the previous surveyed year, which Change preposition
apply
were
going out and sleeping, the former was 6%, which was one-third of the figure in 1958. The latter fell 7% from 32% in 1958.Change the verb form
was
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