The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs give information that four kinds
ofcitrus
fruits that were Correct your spelling
of citrus
Oranges
, Lemons, Grapefruits and others were exported to top
3 countries. From the graphs, we could know which fruit was exported to which countries in 2012.
For Correct article usage
the top
oranges
, South Africa was the top country where imported them
1000 thousand Correct pronoun usage
apply
tonnes
, it was double as Egypt which imported 500 thousand tonnes
. The United states
imported the lowest Correct your spelling
States
amount
of oranges
. As lemons were exported to Mexico the most amount
, it was over 400 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
tonnes
. It's
figure was as twice as the United Correct your spelling
Its
states
did. In terms of Grapefruits, Turkey was the country which imported Correct your spelling
States
them
the highest Correct pronoun usage
apply
amount
, on the other hand
, the united states
did in
200 thousand Change preposition
apply
tonnes
. Also
, Mexico imported the most amounts of other citrus fruits in 2002 compared with the
Egypt and the United Correct article usage
apply
States
.
Overall
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
oranges
were
the Change the verb form
was
hightest
in 2012 compared to other fruits. Correct your spelling
highest
ALso
, Mexico imported Correct your spelling
Also
Lemons
and other citrus Fix the agreement mistake
lemon
friuts
a lot.Correct your spelling
fruits
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