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About cooking: The name of the dish. All the ingredients you need. How to cook it.

#name #dish #ingredients #cook
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 days,
the
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cooking is become
talent
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a talent
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by
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for
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 most
of
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apply
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people
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the people
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especially
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,especially
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young
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the young
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 generation. In
this
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well
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will
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 discuss
what
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the name of the dish which I like
it
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apply
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and the ingredients I need and how to cook it.
In
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 the one hand, the
salat
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salad
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 is
perfect
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the perfect
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 dish for me, because it contains good benefits for human health. And it is feeling active when you finish eating it. So, I like it very much.
In
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 the other hand, the ingredients
lettuce
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are lettuce
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, cabbage, carrot, tomatoes, corn, olive oil, salt and lemon.
First,
I bring all those from
supermarket
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the supermarket
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,
then
 I wash
it
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them
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 well with water, after that I
cutting
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cut
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 lettuce, cabbage, carrot and tomatoes. When I finish mixing
together
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them together
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.
Finally
, I add olive oil, salt and lemon. I
eating
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eat
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 it
in
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for
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 dinner or lunch. In conclusion, I
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am interesting
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interesting
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interested
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 when I make and
eating
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eat
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 it. There are many types of salat
such
 as Italia salat but I prefer simple one.
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