The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph compares the supply of
goods
transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 via road
, water
, rail
and pipeline. Overall
, road
transportation
and water
transportation
carried more quantity
of goods
in the UK
than the amount carried by pipelines and rails.
According to
the given data, initially
in 1974, more than 70 Add a comma
,initially
million
tonnes of products were transported to the UK
on the road
while
around 40 million
tonnes were transported via water
and rail
transportation
. The least quantity
of supplies (around 5 million
tonnes) was transported in pipelines in this
same year. Over the year, the number of goods
transported via road
increased with some fluctuations and reached about 100 million
tons
in 2002. Water
transport was used more for transporting goods
to the UK
and except in 1998, the number of goods
transported by the waterway kept on increasing and finally
reached over 60 million
tons
in 2002. The use of the rail
transportation
system for carrying goods
to the UK
got reduced as less quantity
of goods
were transported by in rail
later years but finally
, the quantity
reached 40 million
tons
in 2002. Finally
, goods
carried by pipelines increased over the year reaching over 20 million
tons
in 2002.Submitted by chartakinnovation on
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