The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph compares the supply of
goods
transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 via
road
,
water
,
rail
and pipeline.
Overall
,
road
transportation
and
water
transportation
carried more
quantity
of
goods
in the
UK
than the amount carried by pipelines and rails.
According to
the given data,
initially
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in 1974, more than 70
million
tonnes of products were transported to the
UK
on the
road
while
around 40
million
tonnes were transported via
water
and
rail
transportation
. The least
quantity
of supplies (around 5
million
tonnes) was transported in pipelines in
this
same year. Over the year, the number of
goods
transported via
road
increased with some fluctuations and reached about 100
million
tons
in 2002.
Water
transport was used more for transporting
goods
to the
UK
and except in 1998, the number of
goods
transported by the waterway kept on increasing and
finally
reached over 60
million
tons
in 2002. The use of the
rail
transportation
system for carrying
goods
to the
UK
got reduced as less
quantity
of
goods
were transported by in
rail
later years but
finally
, the
quantity
reached 40
million
tons
in 2002.
Finally
,
goods
carried by pipelines increased over the year reaching over 20
million
tons
in 2002.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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