You and your friend ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special ocassion and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In you letter *Give details of your visit to the restaurant *Explain the reason for the celebration *Say what was good about the food and the service.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to provide feedback regarding the food and services provided by your
restaurant
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on my special occasion.
Firstly
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, I would like to give information about my visit to your
restaurant
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with my
friend
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jenish
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Jewish
finish
. We arrived
in
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your hotel
last
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Sunday evening. I hope you remember our conversation, which was all about your new
restaurant
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,
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before you gave
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the seat
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to us.
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, I would like to say more about the reason why we come there on that day. I gave
party
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to
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my
friend
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because I had
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promotion
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by my company. I had really happy
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this
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news and we had already given part to my relatives, but I had wanted to celebrate
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with my
friend
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since he has helped me a lot to achieve
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success.
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, I would like to express my appreciation for the excellent food taste and services provided by your
restaurant
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. We ate a Punjabi dish and it was really tasty and delicious. My
friend
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and I
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really liked your food.
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, We
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liked your service the way your staff cooperated with us and all other people. We were really impressed
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that and decided to celebrate all occasions in your hotel. I really appreciate it and Thanks again for making my day even happier. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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