today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil, and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize the effects?

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we should see the effects and reduce the need for sustainable development. In our daily lives, we depend on natural

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, which we use in different ways. In our industry, we produce a lot of products, and

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all things will be stacked.

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whole world will be hampered by making food and leading transportation. And we are using some of the natural energy for mining to take diamonds and other kinds of demandable metals.

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work. So we cannot control it by making rules and regulations; if people are not conscious of

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they will fall victim. For that reason, some international bodies are focusing on and making regulations for using

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in every type of work and need to develop new energies that are not suitable for our new world.

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Topic Vocabulary:

excessive consumption
natural resources
industrial expansion
urbanization
fossil fuels
sustainable practices
resource depletion
water scarcity
renewable energy
green technologies
public awareness campaigns
critical levels
economic growth
immediate gains
international cooperation

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today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil, and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize the effects?

Your opinion

Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

Some companies use a lot of packaging when selling their products. Why is this? Is it a good thing?