today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil, and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize the effects?

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we should see the effects and reduce the need for sustainable development. In our daily lives, we depend on natural
resources
, which we use in different ways. In our industry, we produce a lot of products, and
this
is
also
a daily requirement for our lives.
For example
, you need natural gas for cooking and fuel for a vehicle for transportation. We cannot stop
this
use in our industry and transportation; if we stop it,
then
all things will be stacked.
This
whole world will be hampered by making food and leading transportation. And we are using some of the natural energy for mining to take diamonds and other kinds of demandable metals.
However
, we waste a lot of natural
resources
on
this
work. So we cannot control it by making rules and regulations; if people are not conscious of
this
abuse,
then
they will fall victim. For that reason, some international bodies are focusing on and making regulations for using
this
innate resource. Now they are bound by
this
regulation;
otherwise
, they cannot get any support from an international body. If I give one example about
this
issue, every textile industry should have an ETP (Feuillet treatment process) system;
otherwise
, they cannot get any certification from an international body. They cannot sell any textile items on the international market, so they can easily be motivated by these regulations, and they will try to sustain them. In
this
conclusion, we should not depend on natural
resources
in every type of work and need to develop new energies that are not suitable for our new world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • excessive consumption
  • natural resources
  • industrial expansion
  • urbanization
  • fossil fuels
  • sustainable practices
  • resource depletion
  • water scarcity
  • renewable energy
  • green technologies
  • public awareness campaigns
  • critical levels
  • economic growth
  • immediate gains
  • international cooperation
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