You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to contiune doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working in your letter - describe the work you have been doing - explain why you can no longer do this work - recommend another person who is interest in the work

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Dear Mr Brown, I am Pinar. I have been working voluntary program as a primary school teacher for two years I am writing about I am not able to keep doing

this

role. Kindly, I want to tell you that being an English teacher as a volunteer was an amazing experience that I have done. I travelled

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many countries and met a lot of people who are open-minded through

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voluntary organization. I have learned from them and brought me beyond measure things in

field

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of my personal and professional life. As you know I was working in high school as a teacher too. I applied to

master's

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program

for

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the UK. And The University has accepted my application. So,

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reason

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I have to move to

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the UK in 2 mounts. From on

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I have to deal with my transfer procedures.

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to that I have good news for you as well. I want to let you know I have

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who is from the company that I worked

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. She was my coworker. She is

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dedicated person, and she has a massive enthusiasm for

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role. If you are

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with

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her. Please send me

mail

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. I will be waiting for your positive mail. Best wishes, Pinar.

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