The bar chart below gives the results of a survey in a major company showing the attitudes of two groups of workers to various factors affecting work performance.
The diagram below illustrates the information about the attitudes of the two different types of
employee
, which affects their work performance in a company. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
Overall
, there are 10 reasons affecting the wokers'
performance during working hours and the young generation are seem to be affected more easily in the comparison with the older Correct your spelling
workers'
group
.
To begin
with, as we can see, the total of people from the age of 18 to 30 year-old
have a tendency of distracting Add a hyphen
30-year-old
due to
the chance for personal development,the relaxed working environment, the promotion prospect and the job security is about doubled the number of workers in another group
. With the factors team
spirit and work environment, there is no difference Change preposition
of team
in
the two groups.
Change preposition
between
Moreover
, the amount of people in the group
of 45 to 60 year-old
is slightly over the Add a hyphen
60-year-old
group
of adolescents in the factors of the competent boss and respect from colleagues.Submitted by kakaka03 on
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