The bar chart below gives the results of a survey in a major company showing the attitudes of two groups of workers to various factors affecting work performance.

The diagram below illustrates the information about the attitudes of the two different types of

employee

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employees

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, which affects their work performance in a company.

Overall

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, there are 10 reasons affecting the

wokers'

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workers'

performance during working hours and the young generation are seem to be affected more easily in the comparison with the older

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.

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with, as we can see, the total of people from the age of 18 to

30 year-old

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30-year-old

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have a tendency of distracting

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the chance for personal development,the relaxed working environment, the promotion prospect and the job security is about doubled the number of workers in another

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. With the factors

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of team

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spirit and work environment, there is no difference

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the two groups.

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, the amount of people in the

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of 45 to

60 year-old

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60-year-old

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is slightly over the

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of adolescents in the factors of the competent boss and respect from colleagues.