One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. · What do you think the causes are? · What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt that
traffic
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becoming one of the
pollition
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pollution
for a lot of
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or huge towns, which are usually coming from the
increaseingly
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increasing
increasingly
numbers
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of cars drivers. In
this
essay , I will discuss the reasons
of
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this
problem
and suggest some solutions that might help to reduce its horrible impact on
people
and cities. One of the main causes of
this
phenomenon is the
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needs
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to
using
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transport vehicles, which can be only
handling
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by
traveling
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from
place
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one place
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to
other
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by
cars
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in most
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the
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cases.
In other words
, in
this
world
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most of the important places that
individual
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individuals
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have to go to daily
such
as
work places
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, schools , universities and so on are far away from a lot of
people
's homes which can be difficult to walk
too
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to
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. In
additional
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,
this
problem
can be solved by offering a different public transport for citizens
such
as bus stations, underground metro and so on ,which can be
also
cheap to pay for so
people
will use it more often.
Moreover
, that
also
could help college students who can not afford a car
while
they are just normal students without enough
of
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financial
supports
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. Another
causes
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that could have a role in
this
problem
is that the number of
people
are
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almost impossible to manage especially in
center
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cities,
that
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normally because of the service that are there like healthcare,
eduction
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education
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services and more.
However
, that not a big
problem
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if
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the
goverment
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government
manage to put policemen
everyewhere
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everywhere
to reduce at least have of
impact
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the impact
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it
as well as
building new streets in the places where is the
traffic
are above normal.
Thus
, the congestion of the
traffic
could be solved.
To conclude
, The
traffic
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any big town is
quit
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normal and easy to solve
by
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the help of
government
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the government
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to make new
steels
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and
providing
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new ways to travel easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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