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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates how many
people
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 live in
India
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 and China from 2000 to today and how many will do the same in the future. In general, what stands out from the graph is that the
population
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 of
India
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 is increasing during the observed period. Another interesting point is that scientists predicted in both countries will live the same number of
people
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 in 2030. Looking at the details, as regards
India
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, it can be clearly seen that it started at one
billion
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people
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 in 2000 and continue to grow every year. It does not predict to experience a drop. Concerning China's
population
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, it started at less than 1,3
billion
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people
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 in 2000, it is predicted that it will reach a peak at 1,45
billion
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 in 2030 and
then
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 fall to 1,4
billion
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.
Overall
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, the major difference between the two
population
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 trends is that the number of
people
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 in China is forecast to start falling after 2030
whereas
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 the
population
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 of
India
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 will continue to soar.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, india, population, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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