In some companies, social skills are given priority over qualifications when screening their possible employees. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some
companies
belive
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that social
skills
like communication or stress management are much more important than personal
qualificiations
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qualifications
,
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apply
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when they screen
to
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apply
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their potential
employees
.
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essay will discuss
advantages
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and disadvantages of
this
hypothesis and provide a piece of my humble opinion. It is true that improved social
skills
are essential for workplaces. In terms of business, these abilities can help to extend a
company
's network which could be helpful for future projects.
Extended
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network provides collaboration opportunities among
companies
.
For instance
, many years ago Nike and Apple collaborated
each
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other to
develope
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develop
new chips for sneakers.
Moreover
,
this
collaboration began
by
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their networks. Today Nike's technological sneakers ,called
as
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Nike Runner, are really successful products and have
known
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been known
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by other individuals.
In contrast
, some people still look for
qualification
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qualifications
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as a priority for recruitment. Experience is
undeniable
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an undeniable
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skill
that is
developing your project or
company
over time. Many
employers
familiar
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this
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advantage and looking for experienced colleagues. These
companies
and
employers
are much more conventional than others. For these
companies
, experience is safer than social
skills
to manage a
company
. Because they believe the action of social
employees
are
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is
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risky. From my point of view, these
companies
don't want to work with people whose characteristic is
natural
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entrepreneur. They don't want to risk anything about their jobs.
Nevertheless
, I recommend
employers
to
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give a chance
for
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to
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employees
who have fundamental social abilities.
To conclude
, some
companies
prefer social
skills
over qualifications when screening their employee
candicates
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candidates
. There are many advantages of having social
skills
to manage
company
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a company
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besides
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apply
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disadvantages. Eventually. I believe
employers
should consider
to hire
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hiring
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employees
with social
skills
.
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