You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to apply as an employee to live with your family for six months and take care of your child. My name is Milav Soni and I am from India.
Firstly
, I would like to describe you
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to you
reasons
why I want Correct article usage
the reasons
this
job. First of all, I really want to work with international
Add an article
an international
family
and want to help them in all aspects of life. The reason why I liked it is that I want to learn cultures of diverse countries. Fix the agreement mistake
families
Moreover
, I have been fascinated about
Australian Change preposition
by
cultures
since my childhood.
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culture
Secondly
, the reason why I will be a suitable employee for you is that I am very
helpful and calm person. Add an article
a very
Additionally
, I used to take care of some children of one of the families in Canada last
year. I really enjoy to play
with small kids and I Change the verb form
playing
also
know variety
of tales. Add an article
a variety
the variety
Furthermore
, I am
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apply
also
like to make baby's
food. You can Change noun form
baby
also
check my customers
reviews Change noun form
customer's
customers'
in
Social Media.
During my free time when I am in Australia, I will go Change preposition
on
different
places in Australia and will take photos of them. Change preposition
to different
In addition
, I am also
good at painting, and if you want then
I will draw pictures of your family.
I would be happy to have an opportunity to live with you and your family. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Milav SoniSubmitted by writing7 on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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