You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to apply as an employee to live with your family for six months and take care of your child. My name is Milav Soni and I am from India.
Firstly
, I would like to describe
you
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reasons
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why I want
this
job. First of all, I really want to work with
international
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family
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and want to help them in all aspects of life. The reason why I liked it is that I want to learn cultures of diverse countries.
Moreover
, I have been fascinated
about
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Australian
cultures
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since my childhood.
Secondly
, the reason why I will be a suitable employee for you is that I am
very
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helpful and calm person.
Additionally
, I used to take care of some children of one of the families in Canada
last
year. I really enjoy
to play
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with small kids and I
also
know
variety
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of tales.
Furthermore
, I
am
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also
like to make
baby's
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food. You can
also
check my
customers
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customer's
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reviews
in
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Social Media. During my free time when I am in Australia, I will go
different
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places in Australia and will take photos of them.
In addition
, I am
also
good at painting, and if you want
then
I will draw pictures of your family. I would be happy to have an opportunity to live with you and your family. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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