In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time job while they are still in school. Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages ?

Nowadays,it is becoming more usual for youngsters in high school to take a part-time job during their studies. In

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both merits and demerits of

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teenagers

for a number of rationals.

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teenagers

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era with the big economical issues during the

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century in many countries will be helpful for their families

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with the expenses of studying in higher education and colleges. More importantly, starting work at younger ages helps teens

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learn responsibility and confidence with the taste of independency which is very important for their personality growth. From another angle, it is not without pitfalls for a number of justifications. Primarily, working

teenagers

even for part-time jobs could be easily distracted by their job or they could be tired of work for spending time on their studies.

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, some workplaces could be dangerous for these inexperienced juveniles near abusive employers in some cases. From my perspective, working

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appears to have more benefits than disadvantages as can be seen in different academic research

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a study at the University of Bermingham in the UK. In conclusion, there are pros like earning money and personality growth of working from a young age

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it shouldn't be forgotten that there are some cons like the distraction of study or abusive workplaces in case that I personally think they are less probable in common.