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In some countries the unemployment rate is high, so some people think that children should only go to primary school, not high school because they won’t find a job later. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, citizens in numerous nations that have high unemployment rates believe that kids should only study until the end of primary
school
 and
then
 stop learning since they cannot have a job in the future.
This
 essay will go through why I strongly disagree with that point of view.
Firstly
,
education
 is an essential foundation of a person because it determines the behaviour, action and thinking of
a
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person. Because of
this
, primary
school
 is not sufficient for a child because the more they study, the more knowledge and skills they have. Even if countries have poor employment rates, they must continue to study because it is the only way assists them to find a job.
Secondly
, higher learning environments give them a chance to develop their mental and physical health.
For instance
, math and physicals provide inference for children’s brain or physical
education
 which helps them have good health.
Last
 but not least,
school
 is a miniature society where students can develop the communication and social skills they will need in future
life
. In the case they just only go to primary
school
, they will lack many skills. They do not have enough experience and knowledge to deal with issues in their
life
 and it leads to living a hard
life
.
Additionally
, if they have low
education
, no companies want to hire them and even if they do, they will not make as much money as higher
education
 people.
Moreover
, having low
education
 results in being looked down on by others which makes them depressed and stressed out. In conclusion,
education
 is important to everyone's
life
,
thus
 people should complete their
education
 before focusing on anything else in their future.
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