The chart below show the percentage of water used for diffrent purpoese in six aeas of the world

The chart below show the percentage of water used for diffrent purpoese in six aeas of the world
The charts describe the percentage of
water
used for different
purposes
in six areas of the world. Agriculture , domestic and industrial usages are the three ways that we consume
water
in the world. In Central
Asia
, Africa, south-east
Asia
and South
America
water
is used mostly for agriculture
while
in Europe and North
America
is used mostly for industrial
purposes
. In the first group central
Asia
has the biggest proportion for agricultural
purposes
about 88 %
therefore
South
America
has the smallest portion for agricultural
purposes
about 71 % and south-east
Asia
and Africa have the same proportion for agricultural
use
around 80 % ,
However
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the remaining portion is divided more or less equally between industrial
use
and domestic need. In the second ,group Europe uses most of its
water
sources for industrial
use
about 53% and
also
North
America
uses most of it for industrial
use
about 48 %. Agricultural
use
is more than domestic
use
in both of these areas.
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