The chart below show the percentage of water used for diffrent purpoese in six aeas of the world
The charts describe the percentage of
water
used for different purposes
in six areas of the world. Agriculture , domestic and industrial usages are the three ways that we consume water
in the world.
In Central Asia
, Africa, south-east Asia
and South America
water
is used mostly for agriculture while
in Europe and North America
is used mostly for industrial purposes
. In the first group central Asia
has the biggest proportion for agricultural purposes
about 88 % therefore
South America
has the smallest portion for agricultural purposes
about 71 % and south-east Asia
and Africa have the same proportion for agricultural use
around 80 % ,However
the remaining portion is divided more or less equally between industrial Add the comma(s)
,However
use
and domestic need. In the second ,group Europe uses most of its water
sources for industrial use
about 53% and also
North America
uses most of it for industrial use
about 48 %. Agricultural use
is more than domestic use
in both of these areas.Submitted by shojaeinejad_m on
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